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Whore
Contributed by
clotti
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:03:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you took him away from me,
the only one i ever wanted,
you made me think no one could ever love me,
you taught me that to love wasnt worth it,
that love always hurt,
all that ever mattered was him,
i wanted him, needed him,
you stole him,
i thought he loved me,
you couldnt be happy for me,
you always wanted what i had,
and you usually got it you whore.
his words were meaningless i thought he loved me,
why couldnt you be happy for me
and still they all wanted you,
thet can't see what you've done to me,
why does he still love you?
you've caused me so much pain
now lets lay it to rest,
you got what you wanted,
you made me unhappy,
you caused that
you didnt deserve what you had
i was the faithful one,
you were the one they loved
you broke me, my friend, i hated you for it,
cow.
bicth, take all you want, you cant hurt me anymore
you've already done your worst, your damage
i can never love like i did again because of you
you took that away from me
you whore.
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2004-10-17 06:03:42]
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Re: Whore
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:18:02 AM AEST
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| Love hurts, but more when a friend takes it away from you, know how you feel been there, dont plan to go back, aesome write, written with feeling and showing those emotions well. |
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Re: Whore
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 12:06:03 PM AEST
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Some very harsh words used but i can tell that it came from alot of pain. this is a heartfelt write ive been the cause of a pain like that and i didnt want to be. i really liked this nice one....
love
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