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Abandoned...
Contributed by
tifrob
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:05:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Abandoned...
Where did You go?
I need direction,
Your answers are slow.
Floating in a haze,
Inside my mind,
My thoughts don’t gel
My words are blind...
Abandoned...
Where might You be?
I’m waiting for You,
To help find me.
Lost inside,
My own being,
Searching for You,
Hear my pleading???
Abandoned...
Shut out...
And in,
What did I do?
What was my sin?
Lost...
Unto myself,
Caught in this haze,
Please show Thyself...
Abandoned...
Restore my soul,
Give back my heart,
Erase the haze,
Lift the dark.
Let me speak...
With pad and pen,
Give back my words,
Erase my sin.
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tifrob
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Re: Abandoned...
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by girish on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:16:56 AM AEST
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| my dear no one is abandoned. if they are your real feelings read my poems they will answer |
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Re: Abandoned...
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by screwup on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:58:31 AM AEST
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| wow, great poem... really reminds me of my parents... |
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Re: Abandoned...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:27:18 PM AEST
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this sounds spiritual, and so filled with loneliness.... hugs n' love nessa
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