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Crossroads Of Twilight
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Been thinking about
what I should do
tired of going
round and round
in circles with you.
Cycles of emotion
rotating
keeping me of balance
as I try to run,
you are the master
of
Illusion
you block my escape with confusion.
I remember the way
you use to fascinate
but now
that vision is shattered
and I need to get away.
Thee emotional torture
that I endure
sustains you
you love the way my pain taste,
In this burning Illusion
distortion reigns
all I can see
is your face.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-10-16 23:55:12]
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Re: Crossroads Of Twilight
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:15:43 AM AEST
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I really like how you formatted it, and the line:
"In this burning Illusion
distortion reigns"
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Re: Crossroads Of Twilight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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So very sad but written with percission.
It's really sad that someone could enjoy your pain.
I hope things work out for u really soon. I don't like to see anyone in pain as I've had more than my share of pain in the past.
Luv, huggs,
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Re: Crossroads Of Twilight
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:21:34 AM AEST
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| AWESOME! |
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