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A breath away...
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I guess i will never learn,
For i continue to fall,
Wish i could learn from mistakes,
So i may stand up tall.
Love is hard to find,
In this world of hatred,
I've got to find a way,
My eyes are very tainted.
I need her right now,
She's only a breath away,
Her touch is what i need,
So i can make it through another day.
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
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2004-10-16 23:46:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A breath away...
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylastwords on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:40:44 AM AEST (User
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a great write...and yes, i can relate to this...but i am looking for that special guy who will take care of my heart...not break it...
keep it up...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: A breath away...
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST (User
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great write..I've found that love comes when you aren't looking..so if you stop lookin'.... |
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