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only if you were real
Contributed by
nogoodnamesleft
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:51:06 PM in AEST
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your touch so soft
your eyes so beautiful
the way you say hello my love
that tells me i am the only one
yet in the morning i have to wake
and realize your just a dream
you were only in my imagination
and you never were real
and then at night i go to bed
and our love begins again
the love i that i can never get
in reality
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Re: only if you were real
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:08:46 PM AEST
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| great write =] |
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Re: only if you were real
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:14:51 PM AEST
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Some love you can only get in dreams!! I enjoyed reading this. I hope to get to read more of your writing in the near future~
mckayla |
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Re: only if you were real
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by Buggsy on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:17:28 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem! Nothing more to say. |
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Re: only if you were real
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by AdamChantell on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:49:16 PM AEST
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| simple and short and great. i really like this one, and i think i can only find my "true love" only in my dreams too because here on god's green earth she is yet to be found. |
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Re: only if you were real
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:21:36 AM AEST
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First off..... Welcome to YPDC! (I love your user-name - lol!)
This is a nice first post.... and hugely relatable. I have a few like this on my page as well. *sigh* If only....
Please keep posting...
SNM |
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Re: only if you were real
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:19:00 AM AEST
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This is one cute poem, thanks for sharing.
Jane |
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