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indicazione (rho)...

Contributed by metro on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

a road ahead
and no green lights to guide me,
walking (again) toward
what looks like
blue bodies of water -
the illusions of skin,
the mirages of you
instigated by heat wave...

i see greece -
only gravel ahead...

a desolate consequence,
to let my rebirth get the best of me,
as if i could ever believe in being loved...

i want to climb into yer window, steal you away...
i want to call you from a payhone
and dare you to find me...
smoke me like a cigarette...
play me like a string...

i want to erase it all - what lies between us,
but i write w/ ink and deconstruction's
not that simple...

a pen... a hand... revelations, a road...
no green lights to guide me,
walking (again)...

Copyright © metro ... [ 2004-10-16 22:18:54]
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Re: indicazione (rho)... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:56:32 PM AEST
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I loved this, it was so deep! Really cool. I especially liked this stanza:

i want to climb into yer window, steal you away...
i want to call you from a payhone
and dare you to find me...
smoke me like a cigarette...
play me like a string...

That was hot!!! Good job!

Re: indicazione (rho)... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:28:49 AM AEST
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I loved it... could use a little bit of editing
but overall a very good write. Love the title as well.

Re: indicazione (rho)... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:37:31 PM AEST
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i liked this very much.

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