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All This Hurt
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’m prayin on rocks
Dreamin on dirt
that’s the way its been
Since all this hurt
All this hurt
That wont go away
All this hurt
that’s still here to day
I just cant believe
It could last this long
And everything could go this wrong
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tractorbabe
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2004-10-16 21:48:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All This Hurt
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:08:20 PM AEST (User
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brilliant write. i wish this was longer. this seemed like a perfect stanza in a song. |
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Re: All This Hurt
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST (User
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It was short, but really powerful. I thought it had lots of impact. .. |
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