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Split
Contributed by
senorwoohoo
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Personality split like the yin and the yang,
evil balanced to keep out the pain.
Eyes kept shut to stay in the black,
night is the way to keep us on track.
The light blinds us, the force of the right,
pushing life down until we see night.
Life wasn't like this before the mistake,
but there's only so much a person can take.
Its come to the point I no longer fear death,
as I feel and smell the grim reaper's breath.
Coming to the end of a miserable trek,
I wait for life's waitress to hand me the check.
Copyright ©
senorwoohoo
... [
2002-11-16 00:00:00]
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Re: Split
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:14:12 AM AEST
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| very somber and well written, get your friend some help, |
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Re: Split
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:18:37 AM AEST
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| This had so much feeling in this,how sad to feel this! Your friend is luckt to have you! Christina |
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Re: Split
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by frozensuicide on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:14:27 AM AEST
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| pretty goooodA! hug a moose! |
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Re: Split
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by frozensuicide on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:14:28 AM AEST
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| pretty goooodA! hug a moose! |
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Re: Split
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by alternachik29 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:38:03 AM AEST
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It's beautiful! It touched me and opened me to pity the person to the point that I wanted to reach out and console them. Keep 'em comin'!!!
-alternahcik29 |
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Re: Split
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:59:06 PM AEST
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good poem
it is always
good to help
out your freinds
in need . :*) |
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Re: Split
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 08:35:05 PM AEST
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Dearest Senorwoohoo @-<-<<-
Dark and lovely, my favorite kind of write these days.. well done:)
Always your friend Nessa |
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