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The Band - A French Pantoum
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We walk the street this day,
we hold each other's hand.
Our talk is month of May,
when we shall hear the band.
We hold each other's hand,
we speak of things we like.
When we shall hear the band,
for them we'll take a hike.
We speak of things we like,
her students will be there.
For them we'll take a hike,
our friends will play with care.
Her students will be there,
we walk the street this day.
Our friends will play with care,
our talk is month of May.
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ramfire
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2002-11-15 23:40:00]
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Re: The Band - A French Pantoum
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:41:58 AM AEST
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Thisi s such a beautiful write
I really enjoyed reading this one
ramfire, your so full of talent
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Band - A French Pantoum
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:01:04 PM AEST
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I'm glad you like my poem. Thank you for the good score. This is one of my favorite forms of poetry. Every time I reread it, I get a happy feeling. It's almost like skipping down the street as I did when I was a boy.
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Ramfire |
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