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How Can You?
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:17:29 PM in AEST
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Many nights I cried myself to sleep
Wondering how you could do this to me
You said people say things that they really don't mean
But not when it happens a lot
How can that be
I was scared and you did not protect me
You let me get hurt and that wasn't right
If you love me why do you stick up for her
I don't understand how you can love her when I was there first
I might sound selfish but it is the truth
You put me under her
Let her treat you wrong
I'm the one who you are supposed to care about
You hear about the people with no one at all
That is what I wish you would be
I wish you would leave me alone and not look back
I have already tried to get you away but things always get right
I have a life that I need to live
You are holding me back
You say you love me how can that be true
Letting her do what she does to me isn't love
It is pure hatrid
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Re: How Can You?
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by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:46:20 PM AEST
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that was a strong write i hope every thing works out for you reading this reminded me of myself but i was the one hurting the person i loved thanks for making me see way iam changeing my ways
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Re: How Can You?
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:36:25 PM AEST
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First.... let me say - Welcome to YPDC! I hope you stick around and post more of your work!
This piece is heartbreaking. Your pain is abundantly clear in this poem. Very emotive... well expressed, good write!
Again welcome! Wishing you well-
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Re: How Can You?
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry you have to deal with that...wish I could help
But the poem was great...very vivid...keep writing
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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