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My Heart (Dodoitsu)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 08:59:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart has always been yours
please treat it with loving care
all I ask of you is this
my heart is fragile.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.24/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-10-16 08:59:07]
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Re: My Heart (Dodoitsu)
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:32:51 AM AEST
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| Very short but it said what was needed...Good |
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Re: My Heart (Dodoitsu)
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:18:12 PM AEST
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beautiful...almost made me cry...brings back memories....
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: My Heart (Dodoitsu)
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:09:56 PM AEST
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| wow cynthia..this is great. I wish you''d teach me to do all these different kind of poetry..I still can't get the hang of diamonte... It baffles me..My seizures make me lose a lot of my cognitive reasoning and some things..I just stare at and don't get..It saddens me, especially if it comes to my writing. Darn. You do it all so well.. How's the blog coming? Do you like it? |
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Re: My Heart (Dodoitsu)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:08:26 AM AEST
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direct and to the point well done.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: My Heart (Dodoitsu)
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:49:25 PM AEST
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Short and sweet,
a good write
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