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Just can go back...
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:20:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm on the run,
And i've not many places to go.
I'm feeling afraid,
I'm too scared to go home.
Yesterday, I was almost seen,
That was TOO close!
My options are limited,
And i'm feeling so confused.
I thought they'd care by nowm,
And give me a call.
I'm pleased that they haven't,
But i'm still sad and all.
Maybe that's their way of saying,
They don't care any more,
Maybe they love me,
But just WANNA watch me fall...
My head's going round,
Trying to find some place to stay.
I'm waiting to be doobed in,
And the police to be told i've run away.
I'm waiting inside illusion,
Trying to find a reason to be me.
My head is swelling with emotion,
'Coz the present is tormenting me.
I'm trying to keep my head up,
Not give it in.
Not go round the corner,
And repeatedly slash my skin,
Not go on a roof,
Searching for the end.
Not tell people the truth,
So i can be put in care again...
I DON'T WANT THEM TO FIND ME!
I'm dreading the thought.
I can't go back there,
Richard makes me distraught!
I can't face the bruising on her leg,
I can't face the thought.
... But I sure gotta do some thing!
Before I actually AM caught!
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2004-10-16 07:20:37]
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Re: Just can go back...
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:20:45 AM AEST
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hey rosie,i liked the way you vented in this poem it relates completly to what you are going through right now,im glad you are out of there it wasnt the best place for you to be so maybe now that you are on your own you can feel free spirited,love and peace4 u&the queen
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Re: Just can go back...
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by shanarah on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:25:26 AM AEST
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Hopefully this will bring positive to you! nice way of showing your emotions. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Just can go back...
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by screwup on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:48:01 PM AEST
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Rosie,
I am sorry you are going thru this *****... sounds like what my family is putting me thru too... just please keep your head up high and remember I'm always here...
~Deanna |
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Re: Just can go back...
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by Nobrainer on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:34:24 AM AEST
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hey, well your poem was very well writen, though i feel bad for you for all the "stuff" your goin through, DoNt GiVe Up HoPe though, if they treat you like ****.. well you deserve better so forget them, its their loss, anywhos thanks for sharing *hugs*
Jess |
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