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Steps Toward Psychosis
Contributed by
brigitte7735
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:35:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Again I waken with sweat-laced profile
Taking a moment to shake my fatigue
Salvage the drippings of my dream's exile
Losing the image that dared to intrigue
Listless, I wander down a faint hallway
Haunted by choices I can't yet explain
Grasping at something that still sneaks away
Stumble on secrets that sigh with disdain
Stalking my conscience, past the night's purview
Stepping so silent, don't want to unnerve
Fearful of banshee in vaults I pursue
Wishing to elude the pain I deserve
Running for comfort, as my last resort
Listen for footsteps of the mind's chiding
Tangled in branches and my thoughts contort
Crippled by stigmas I can't keep hiding
Abscond from braiding, yet I am mislaid
Dwelling has vanished, as if on instinct
Matter can deceive, and it has betrayed
Amble toward shadow, but it's not distinct
Ripping through confines of time's known design
Breaking the structure which we are aware
Fallen in favor, cast from the divine
Nowhere to escape, trapped in my nightmare
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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Wonderful write...very vivid...keep writing you've got talent
Love ya,
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:53:29 AM AEST
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| A heavy intense poem, vivid images painted, rampart emotions played out throughout the whole write, awesome poem. |
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:29:51 AM AEST
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Visions of Jonah trapped in the whale come into my head when I read this. Isn't it odd how we can be so stuck in those graves and yet, once we take the step out, hardly need to glance back. Just rambling, but this really struck me with regard to where I am and have been in my life. Moving forward can be so difficult...yet, once completed, we wonder how it could be so easy. OK, now you've really got me rambling. This is an excellent write. Deep and beautifully structured. Nice work.
Stitch |
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:52:52 AM AEST
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A beautifully dark write. Creative, inspiring and written to perfection. Thank you for sharing!
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:31:20 PM AEST
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hey! aint read any of your stuff in awhile sadly.
but like always you manage to write a sophisticated,intelligent,well thought out peice that really moves my soul. keep writing!
~Vermillion~ |
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Re: Steps Toward Psychosis
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:30:42 PM AEST
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Hi There Brigetti,
How nice to meet you. I've corresponding with your husband whom I dearly love. He suggested I look you up and see the two of you together.........what a nice looking couple you two!
I like your poem very much also, you should start writing again, Tell Dan he better too, you are both out of practice............
I wish you both nothing but happiness and long years together.
Warm love
LovingCritters
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