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The Crashing Of Waves
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:44:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The Crashing Of Waves
Upon the rocks and shore
As the tide rises to the sand
Washes away any trace
Of the castle that I made
With my own two hands
But it is not no more
For I still have my hands
And I can build it again
Better than before
In a different place
Where the waves cannot reach
And when it is done I will
Sit on the rocks and think of you
As I watch the sun set
With its orange and pinks
Over the water
It reflects the light
Back over the horizon
And makes my day almost complete
The sun fades away bit by bit
And the stars start to appear
The clouds conceal the moon
And then I see you
How beautiful you are
In a most simple way
The way I love
I think you are why
The sun sets
You bring out the beauty
In all of the night
As the light from the stars
Give you this glow
And flowers bloom
With you every step
As you walk to me
Your bare feet leaving
Prints in the sand
That the ocean loves to fill
And fade out as if
You had not been there
Because it is jealous of you
How beautiful you are
You are the one thing
I can ever
Love more than the sea
You sit by me
I take you into my arms
And you fade away
Back into my memories
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Re: The Crashing Of Waves
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by mylastwords on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:50:44 AM AEST
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you know what i think of your poems...i love them always...they bring a tear to my eye...keep writing...if not for you...for me...and the others who love your work...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx
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Re: The Crashing Of Waves
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:13:07 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem with so much inner tenderness, a really cool write. |
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Re: The Crashing Of Waves
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by shanarah on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:57:05 AM AEST
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I have to agree, keep writing these tear jerkers. i enjoyed it. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: The Crashing Of Waves
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:19:57 AM AEST
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My love is also the sea so beautiful.
Your poem was fantastic precious memories
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: The Crashing Of Waves
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by chimera on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:26:30 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Imagery. |
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