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Another Mouth
Contributed by
brigitte7735
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:32:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm searching for another mouth
For nights when urge dilutes reason
The calming clutch of a stranger
Ally to my body's treason
I'm searching for another mouth
To coddle insecurity
Lavish praise on my greedy ears
Shawled by faux humility
I'm searching for another mouth
To thieve the words I admire
But could never manage myself
A coward's ploy to inspire
I'm searching for another mouth
One doesn't fulfill as three will
A naive boy to cement worth
Until I tire of the thrill
Then I search for another mouth
Steal a kiss, a heart or thought
Find a fresh, unsuspecting soul
Run from affliction I begot
I'm searching for one perfect mouth
Unsatisfied by sensation
I search on, but none can answer
Demands of imagination
Copyright ©
brigitte7735
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2004-10-16 00:32:22]
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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| amazing write. extremely well written. excellent rhymes and rhythym. |
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:39:16 AM AEST
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| This is a nice poem :-) |
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:29:56 AM AEST
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| cool poem like the making of a beautiful song, or balad like harmony, awesome write, enjoyed reading it, from such a talented poet. |
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Stitch on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:42:08 PM AEST
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Very interesting. The imagination always far outweighs reality doesn't it? Take heart...after all these years (and you know I'm old) my reality actually is catching up a little. Yes, it does get better. Nice write. Very nice.
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:28:14 AM AEST
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my comments usually consist of me rambling about my inabiltiy to comment very well, so i'll skip all that and keep this brief. this scrawl was original, well-formed, and inspiring. it gets a bag of berry skittles. damn good show.
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:57:02 AM AEST
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Brilliant! I can't believe i've missed so much of your writing, i'm left in awe at your ability to create such masterpieces. *bows humbly*
Take Care
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Re: Another Mouth
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:26:15 PM AEST
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universal. everyone can relate to at least one stanza, if not all. i would quote what i love but that would betray which stanzas i relate to and that would be a bit too revealing for me.
fabu*****lous write.
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