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-more incoherent banter for that masses-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:28:43 AM in AEST
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conversation's getting stailer than the air in this burning building
and my hearts on fire bye and bye i'm dieing tomorrow
waking up dreaming of your and the sheets are cold
soft lips are comforting your tounge is hard in my mouth
i swear i won't feel a thing passion is dreaming
and my heart's on fire with you on my mind
bye and bye i'm trying tomorrow
can't blame me for trying
can't handle this verbal orgy
let's throw down dialouge with masks off
gunna give it all up
lets be scared for a while
this time the tragedy's real but the smiles can't be plastered
give hands in the air scream for denile
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TaintedOptomist
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2004-10-16 00:28:43]
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Re: -more incoherent banter for that masses-
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:42:46 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. i liked the randomness in this, it made it intriguing. very nice rhyme pattern too. just work on your grammar....and your description was priceless =] |
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Re: -more incoherent banter for that masses-
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:32:11 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, flowing words, confusion yet not, strange rythem but catchy all the same, cool poem. |
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