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Blue Eyes
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:59:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blue eyed baby boy
Timid, soft spoken
Yet boisterous and bold
Kisses so soft
As the stroke of a feather
Skin creamy smooth
Hands rough like leather
Massaging my body
Stroking my skin
Stirring my passions
I've held deep within
Bringing the side of me
I like to keep hidden
Up to the surface
It feels too good
As if it's forbidden
I don't really know
Tomorrow where we will be
I do know that you
Have awakened something in me
The epitome of sweetness
And all that is good
Yet the devil reincarnate
Reflected in those eyes of blue
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RhythmBndt
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2004-10-15 20:59:51]
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST
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Oh how i know the power of what eyes can do to your soul.
Blue eyes >>>she sighs>>>> for now sees them deep within tearing at her heart.
I wrote a poem called forever blue eyes reminded me a little of this.
A passionate write if it feels good and makes you happy so be it let it flow
Marvellous poem
Love Angelxxxx
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Re: Blue Eyes
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by Anesthetic on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:57:52 PM AEST
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Blue eyes aye, how they betray the heart. Very good write.
Keep up the great work:)
~Charli~ |
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Re: Blue Eyes
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by IrshLass on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 06:15:20 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I love it. |
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