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Man-child
Contributed by
humphdj
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 01:29:52 PM in AEST
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I’m waiting for you to love me
I know that you say you do
But saying it without showing it
Makes all the words unglue
I know you’re very busy
And I won’t get in your way
If you just show your love for me
I’ll put my blues away
I know I’m being silly
I know I shouldn’t cry
I know I’ll never feel your love
From the pity in your eye
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2002-07-18 13:29:52]
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Re: Man-child
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 03:42:22 PM AEST
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Sometimes its the things we do that say more than our spoken words...good but sad write...
~~~~Lasca~~~~ |
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Re: Man-child
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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Now it's your turn to make me weep. I relate to this so much and as I think I said to you once...ever the child. You have said so much in so few words.
Chrissie xx |
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Re: Man-child
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by lilsmurfy on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 07:01:58 AM AEST
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| very well written and heart wrenching ...alls i can say here is that some just dont know how to show there Love as we wish and hope that you find all your looking for ..great write |
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Re: Man-child
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by chatabox on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 08:38:41 PM AEST
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eeek, that tugged at my heart rather.I was talking about this very subject yesterday you know. After having grown up in with the kind of parents that never showed love, I was determined not to be like that to my son.
emotional write, great message. |
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