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The end
Contributed by
Sordida
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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People said you didn’t care
But I thought you would
People said to keep you here
I would have if I could
Life was made worth living
At least for that one day
My sudden beast of guilt trip
Has taken life away
You’re so wonderfully innocent
Even though you’re not
You have an evil smile
And you play around a lot
I don’t know why I care
But apparently I do
I hope that you are happy
I hope I will be too
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-10-15 17:37:30]
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Re: The end
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by gt on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:13:13 PM AEST
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| I really like this. You control the rhythm well, and I love the rhyme scheme. Great poem |
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Re: The end
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:12:21 PM AEST
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Sad poem, but I agree with gt.
You've written this one quite well.
~Breezy |
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