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Stand By
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:36:26 PM in AEST
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It's a horrible feeling knowing
That I can't save you
From what you've become
What can I do
But stand by and watch
So helpless
As you sick up the last bit of humanity
Left in you
It leaves an ugly stain upon the carpet
Sometimes I can't help but feel alone
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-15 15:36:26]
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Re: Stand By
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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| Yep, my brothers are like that. They get into trouble, and all I can do is watch them get hurt. It sucks. Your poem really shows what a person goes through in that kind of situation. You did good. ;) ~hugs~ |
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Re: Stand By
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by a_bear on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:46:04 PM AEST
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| great write..and yes..I have and I do. I live with someone who has paranoia..it's almost a daily thing.. |
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Re: Stand By
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by theMoth on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:17:17 PM AEST
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It works very well,
alienated from
being helpful,
then feeling alone.
A very good lttle poem.
--Mothy |
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Re: Stand By
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by metro on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:42:02 PM AEST
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excellent expression... i love this piece...
it makes me sad... in a good way...
metro |
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Re: Stand By
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:34:56 AM AEST
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| Yes, I indeed do understand how it feel when you see your friend begin to do something which can only hurt them. It's a sad feeling. Like this a lot. Very deep in meaning |
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Re: Stand By
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by chimera on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 08:48:05 AM AEST
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| been there. never easy. |
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