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In The Mist
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The rain falls down
when heaven cries.
The clouds line up
to form a frown.
The fog lifts shame
as it dissipates,
to take the blame
for the cross we bear.
The rainbow holds
so much hope
to rain on earth
to let us grow.
The moon will rise
to light the way
and reflect the love
for tomorrow's another day
~*~
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Re: In The Mist
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by inoc on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:40:03 PM AEST
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lovely write you all blend well together
cheers!~ |
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Re: In The Mist
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:24:01 PM AEST
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A beautiful... beautiful write... U blended his so well together...
Thanks for sharing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: In The Mist
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:17:33 AM AEST
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| Very good poem..Good job |
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Re: In The Mist
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:11:03 AM AEST
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Nice write it flowed so evenly nice job.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: In The Mist
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:40:24 PM AEST
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These few words create a masterpiece of imagery! It's so full of... well... everything! Hope, sadness, happiness, light, dark... it's all here.
You've done a wonderful job!!!
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:44:35 PM AEST
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| There is a lot of hope hidden in this poem. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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Great combo!!
And this is so representative of life...well done!! |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Kie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:53:46 AM AEST
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What an inspirational and elegant poem you all have created.
You lifted my spirits.
Wonderful poem.
Kie |
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Re: In The Mist
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by treasure on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 11:55:31 AM AEST
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| an awesome write. i enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: In The Mist
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:29:44 PM AEST
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a little bit of every feeling in here....
short n sweet as they say:)
w/ luv 4 lyfe
Care |
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Re: In The Mist
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:04:20 AM AEST
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This poem makes me want to look up and appreciate LIFE!..
I thank you for waking me up and embracing the mist!!!....
cheers!~ |
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Re: In The Mist
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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This is an excellent collaboration. It makes me want to slide down the other side of the rainbow into a better tomorrow. I like your imagery in this.
Morning Dove |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:53:06 AM AEST
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a lovely joint effort - absolutely loved this piece great tie ins to nature.
loved the line 'The rainbow holds
so much hope
to rain on earth
to let us grow'. was very very clearly phrased.
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Re: In The Mist
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:20:29 PM AEST
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Jacee_Line
A pleasent read i flows well and is a joy to read.
"Very relaxing"
and
We need that
Thanks
Sinned |
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Re: In The Mist
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by stew777 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:25:32 AM AEST
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Loved the read,beautiful write.
Awesome content.
thanks for sharing.
God Bless you all. |
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