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Fake
Contributed by
LinZ
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It’s just a face, a veneer hiding who you are
What is it that you fear, that you’ll be judged bizarre?
Are you afraid to lose your place in life?
As Ms. All-that, Ms. Perfect, Ms. You-wish-you-were-me, Ms. Right?
If people hid who they were, life would be unsharpened, boring, and dull
So don’t hide your thoughts where no one can find them, or where you store them will soon be full
And what happens when where you store your thoughts is used up and there’s no more room? Will you let your feelings show, let them out abruptly, without warning, with a BOOM?!
Let this be a lesson...
If people chose to be someone fake, life would boring, dull, and bland
So don’t sit there and be someone you’re not, get up and take a stand!
Copyright ©
LinZ
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2004-10-15 13:57:35]
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Re: Fake
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by Versifier on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:03:04 PM AEST
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An up-lifting poem LinZ
Kudos.^_^ |
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Re: Fake
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:05:14 PM AEST
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great write, I am proud of who I am and some people dont like what trhey see, but to be honest it's their problem and they'll have to deal with it, I have neber hid who I was, but people do as they are frightened that maybe they will be rejected or disliked,
takecare
pixie xx
hope to read more from you soonx |
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Re: Fake
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:01:07 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. |
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Re: Fake
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:21:59 AM AEST
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Nice one Lin *smiles* excellent choice for your first post *hugs* take care...Oh I wrote another last night...check it out...
Love Ya,
~Kiela~ |
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