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No Appeals
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I can hear you breathin’
I can smell your fear
I can see your footprints
Can you feel me near ?
Hunting in the darkness
I am close upon your heels
With a blinding flash of light
I will no longer be concealed
I'm falling down upon you
You’re within my grasp
Vengeance flows within my veins
I’m gonna kick your ~
Ask for mercy
Beg for grace
You’re headed to your final
Resting Place
The stage is set
Your fate's revealed
And by my hand
It will be sealed
~ No Appeals ~
Check every corner
Turn on each light
You can’t flee
And you can’t fight
I’ll be everywhere
That you can’t see
And waiting for you
In your dreams
Plead for mercy
Beg for grace
You’re headed to your final
Resting Place
The stage is set
Your fate's revealed
And by my hand
It will be sealed
~ No Appeals ~
~ No Appeals ~
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Nazmythian
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2004-10-15 13:23:08]
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Re: No Appeals
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:29:17 PM AEST
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Well Naz, if you stick a few witches, demons,ghosties and goblins and zombies in here you would have one dazzling Halloween poem!
Revenge is sweet, like savouring the tastiest of treats, huh?
Rita |
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Re: No Appeals
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST
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a great use of anger here, passionate write,
pixie xx |
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Re: No Appeals
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by inoc on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:35:54 PM AEST
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this poem has that splendid beat and oh
I can feel your heat...!
brilliant Nazmythian
cheers!~ |
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Re: No Appeals
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by a_bear on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:36:01 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry Naz..I have to calm down and read it later..I skipped a line or something..I misread and thought it said I can smell your foorprints..I can't stop laughin...I'm in an odd mood..need to focus..I'll give it a serious read a bit later..but really..trackers could..never mind. No I don't do dope!!! |
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Re: No Appeals
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:54:11 PM AEST
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Wow nazzy! You da man!!!
This was great.
~Breezy |
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Re: No Appeals
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:04:13 PM AEST
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Anna has sung to you again, I see! That is wonderful, Scott. Ah, revenge is sweet, no? This poem made me a bit paranoid, lol. Been looking over my shoulder for the past several minutes. A chilling song of a "fate that has been revealed"; death. Oh, how I love this piece!! It speaks of my feelings towards my father so eloquently! I could have never said it better! You have much talent, dearest Naz! I truly enjoyed this piece thoroughly; the rhyming was excellent, the flow was enchanting... Captivating till the very end! Much love and blessings! Forever yours,
Fleur de Sang |
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Re: No Appeals
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by theMoth on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:51:58 PM AEST
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Your competenc is getting
redundant.
Do something really, really bad
for a change!
Grrrr...
--Mothy |
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Re: No Appeals
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by Willofree on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:22:49 PM AEST
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Naz,
A powerful poem of revenge and retrobution... intense emotion.
Excellent write.
I enjoyed the read very much.
Willofree |
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