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Your Face
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How beautiful the face of a man.
His features so perfect, so unique!
But yet so vulnerable to every other man.
The eyes,
The brow,
The lips,
The smile,
The frown!
All shine forth as an expression of that which is held...
soul deep within.
At times one desires these thoughts to be known.
At other times, to hold them deep within,
the shadows of one's existence.
However, our bodily make-up deceives us,
and becomes a mirror of that within,
only to those looking on who have eyes to see.
And what gives on the eyes to see?
Is it mere closeness or nearness?
I think not...
two who are concerned with the existence of the other.
Two who have let a love ande affection grow between them.
Then, do they become vulnerable, to each other.
Then, do they learn to read each other's hearts.
Then, the secrets, if any, are few between them.
Such is what I wish to say to you.
My only regret is that I caused some of your burden.
For this, my heart is troubled.
Many things lay heavy on your mind and heart...this I see.
And it is not necessary...that they be shared with me.
I only wish for you to know there is someone who can see.
There is someone who cares, trusts and understands you!
Whether this helps or not, I do not know.
May it be my gift to you!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
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2004-10-15 12:44:24]
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Re: Your Face
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by shanarah on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:56:18 PM AEST
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this is so sweet, and sounds sincere, I really liked it. take care,
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Re: Your Face
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST
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this is a beatiful piece of work..GOOD JOB...
blessed be
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Re: Your Face
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by Willofree on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:46:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful message which describes a very intimate state of being between enduring friends. A deep level of a bond between people who deeply care for one another is how it strikes me.
Very moving
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