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I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:56:19 AM in AEST
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I have laughed & I have cried,
I have lived & I have died,
I have felt like I couldn’t carry on,
I have lost my hearts love song.
My soul has been before broke in two,
I have both loved & hated you,
I have sobbed until my heart cracked,
I felt my frail body deteriorate & snap.
My smile has been overcast by fear,
I have longed to hold you near,
Once I pushed you far, far away
Didn’t want to see the light of the day.
I have cried a lovely river,
I have felt my insides wither,
My love has made me strong & weak,
Have felt so frightened I could not speak.
Hate & love are both my extremes,
They both often come from me in reams,
One minute I hate & then I love,
I can be a raven or a beautiful dove.
I have laughed & I have wept,
Felt for years I have not slept,
I feel peace, in the same breath rage,
Feel so free yet locked in life’s cage.
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by emphaticplacebo on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:11:54 PM AEST
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Great write. Neat rhyming and good flow. I really enjoyed reading this, as I am sure plenty of others will. Nice work as usual, Pixie :)
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:12:29 PM AEST
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Can sum up the answer to this poem in one of your lines.... locked in life’s cage.yep this is all about our lives.. every detail of your poem sums it all up. we all feel this way one way or another. called seasons of life. Right now I am in spring happy joy joy.. but been in the winter where I am feeling blue.. love your poem...sandy
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:26:03 PM AEST
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It is so true to me as well Pixie. You always seem to sum up life so well. Great write, dear !!
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:02:09 PM AEST
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I'm so jealous. I wish I had hal the talent you do. What power, eloquence, and emoitions you write with.
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 08:01:46 PM AEST
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Awesome write even tho very sad. I to can relate to this write as well.
A masterpeice of how life is from time to time.
luv, huggs,
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:11:28 AM AEST
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Re: I Have Laughed & I Have Cried
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:13:54 AM AEST
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Krissie this is amazing. Though you have wrote about something so sad, it is from your heart which is where the best poetry comes from. This poem had me gripped to the very end and your right we are locked in life's cage. But keep your chin up your a wonder person and an excellent writter!
*hugs you*
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