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Dissappointment
Contributed by
ladyaryssa
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:23:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Dissappointment
You're not who I thought you were
Not innocent, or angelic
Not like me
And it hurts that you're not perfect
For a while it seemed obvious
That you should be with me
I know my expectations were impossibly high
But your act made them so, and
Now I feel cheated
Shattered below you and wondering
Why you wore the mask of deceit
Was it insecurity?
Peeling it off terrified me
As if you were ugly underneath
I felt something break
I know I can't glue it back
But I know I haven't really
Lost anything at all
You were always like this, covering up
And I didn't see it
How was I to know?
I guess the lesson in this is
Not to be so shallow
I let you in too quickly
Just because you were beautiful
You didn't have to prove yourself
By now I should know better
Now I do know better.
Copyright ©
ladyaryssa
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2004-10-15 11:23:06]
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Re: Dissappointment
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:28:53 AM AEST
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I am sorry you found out the hard way, sounds like you have learnt a valuble lesson hopefully you will find someone who is truly deserving of your love, a very well expressed write,
pixie xx
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Re: Dissappointment
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:52:12 PM AEST
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Great poem. It's refreshing to hear a new voice with a new style of writing. This is a very thought proviking piece and it shows that you have a lot of insight into your relationship, and I like how you as the writer, learned something from what you were writing. That, to me, is how I can see a true writer.
Be True,
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Re: Dissappointment
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:59:14 PM AEST
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| well expressed write...I can relate I always get my hopes up only for them to come crashign down..well excellent write keep on posting |
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