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In the end you'll save me
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know its sad
But you know its true
I can't hide it
I'd do anything for you
Cupids hit me with his arrow
And now Im a slave to love
As Im a slave to the heavens
Your an angel from above
Theres so much I know
But so much more learn
Because I am not yet through with love
So for now I'll have to burn
Why is it like this?
From far away love looks like a glorious gift
But once you have it
You wish the burden would lift
This bliss we once experienced
Our love, no where near discreet
Is now being suffocated, drowned
No longer a preserving sweet
Softly kiss my head
And wish me goodnight
And I will sleep in peace
Until I see your light
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Kitty_cat
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2004-10-15 10:41:49]
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Re: In the end you'll save me
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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a lovely write, but sad also,
pixie xx |
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Re: In the end you'll save me
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:18:37 PM AEST
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| This is a really sweet poem. The end of it kind of completely stopped it in its tracks in this really sudden way, it worked really well. |
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Re: In the end you'll save me
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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"Why is it like this?
From far away love looks like a glorious gift
But once you have it
You wish the burden would lift"
I know those lines all to well...it seems to definetly scare you and soffocate you...your whole life has to change...great job bro!
please comment on my work too
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