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LOVE VAPORS
Contributed by
wellsmark
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Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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LOVE VAPORS
Among the chestnut we did talk,
Deeming hands as we walk.
Birds are singing wings are humming,
Micro animals gnawing, and are hunting.
Wind warped spun spider silk.
Marbled clouds in the frosty air,
Bee’s gentle passes intent on nature’s milk.
Trees swayed with nimble fingers.
Shadows and the sunshine,
Almost seemed locked in time.
Eyes peer from moss curtains,
Waiting flaunting feathers.
We sat with eyes of lovers,
Bathed in golden shine.
I found myself kissing thee,
We had no trouble just inner peace.
Your flesh likes succulent apples,
Tasted all so sweet.
Love vapors rolling down the vales,
We slip beneath callow sheets.
Making love I feel her seep,
So sweet in endless deplete.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
... [
2002-11-15 18:00:00]
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Re: LOVE VAPORS
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 07:54:39 PM AEST
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Nicely done!!!!
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Re: LOVE VAPORS
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by OreO on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:00:56 PM AEST
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Wow this is so beautifully written
very creative write and with such
passion and love flowing through
it gives a beautiful vision, Thanks
for sharing this one i enjoyed
reading it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: LOVE VAPORS
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by wellsmark on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:02:49 PM AEST
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| Thankyou you are too kind. |
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