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Requim for One
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:47:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Space
Empty, Empty Space
A Void Of Missing Lossed Miscilleniuos Nothingness
aspired
renewed
cancelled
the space
I have
the space
I want
the space
I hate
The space ive come to know as life
in soul and body
transistion
opened
the eternal question
the eternal war
like the sun set, only to re-appear
twisted faculties
and cylindrical squares
with no sides
but only corners
without shape
these feelings are meaningless
without words
one cannot speak
with language
one cannot write
you can see into its eyes
but there lies a compremise
lesser
or more
for less
less greater
like the masters
this tablet, here
its takes away
that no-body gave
that keeps me away
that traps all within it
tele-apples
and tele-visions
mortal combats
linned with immoral wombats
in every word that is spoken here
is worth less than the last
its so low, its inverted
and now everyword is spoken is gold
a golden feather
plucked from the platinum goose
plucked from a plutonium wedding ring
adorned on the chest of some dead soldier
carved into history
boarded within somebodies mind
left to rot
left
to
rot
Copyright ©
01_zanzebar
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2004-10-15 05:47:29]
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Re: Requim for One
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by Archie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:22:31 PM AEST
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| I like the original concept of this poem. A long pause hushes the crowd after the first word and they wait patiently for the next breaking into applause afrter the speech is over. |
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Re: Requim for One
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:38:13 PM AEST
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| i agree with archie. fantastic write. |
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