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The Knife
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look in the mirror as it shows my reflection
I look at the my reflection’s hand
It holds a knife and my reflection comes out of the mirror
It walks behind me and brings the knife to my neck
Then it says” You can’t hide from me I’m you, and you are me”,
“, This is the real you, disturb, filled with sorrow, and empty”,
“You can’t feel anything but guilt”,
“That’s it blame yourself because its all your fault. Its not a dream”,
“You killed your family and now you’re about to kill yourself”,
With the knife up at my neck, I take my reflection’s hand
And sliced my head off and there stands my reflection, fading away
“ I knew it. You couldn’t take it anymore, I always thought you were weak.”
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the_fallen
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2004-10-15 00:55:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:59:45 AM AEST (User
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***** this is scary you need help
just kidding its an odd write but good
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Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by screwup on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:41:13 AM AEST (User
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good write... I wouldn't call it scary I think about this kinda **** all the time. fantastic peice o' work...
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