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Contributed by
wachumiri
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If winds could be words
And waterfalls songs
Then maybe my words
Would flow softer and sweeter
If raindrops that fall
Were notes to a song
That song would need lyrics
And those words would be you
For you are the dearest
Thing that I know
The sweetest notes
From the most beautiful melody
Would complete their rhythm
In you
More lovely than love
Your beauty's amazing
The stars and the sea
Are pale when you shine
God made the sun
To light your face
He made the night
That in dreams
I might still
See you
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: You
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:16:03 AM AEST
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Exquisite and inspired.
I loved the first two stanzas especially.
This makes for a lovely read... |
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Re: You
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:42:29 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: You
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:54:56 PM AEST
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David a really outstanding poem, so beautifully written and expressed. Must have took her breath away. :)
Take Care
~Carmen~ |
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Re: You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST
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David-
Amazing! Your best love poem ever! If a man wrote something like this for me I would nearly swoon! |
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Re: You
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 01:08:03 AM AEST
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A very fine piece of work, if I do say so myself. You can do well when you take the time to be a perfectionist (a little perfectionism never killed anyone, Clive!).
Me like.
Andrew |
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Re: You
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:28:12 AM AEST
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| Oh my goodness. What a beautiful love poem. It brought tears to my eyes, and made me say awwww. What a lucky girl. |
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Re: You
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by black-bruised-n-broken on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:17:33 AM AEST
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| very good expression in the writting. |
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Re: You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:46:53 AM AEST
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A true heavenly masterpiece. Beautifully written with every essence of love within every word. Breath taking and captivating. You never cease to amaze me dearest David.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: You
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 11:21:06 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Your words are very encouraging and I hope the person to which you wrote them to was very encouraged |
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