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Your Words and Mine 4
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Our last day together
what a wonderful four days it has been
No one could possibly imagine
the feelings we are both having within
To love each other this way
is not very easy on us
When there is no viable solution
for us even to discuss
So our lives will go on as they are
and our meetings whenever we can
The future we will have together
the two of us will have to plan
We both know that our love
is as strong as it possibly could be
Anyone seeing us together
this they will surely see
As we say farewell again
planning our next meeting soon
She kisses me goodbye, at the airport
just a few minutes after noon
Copyright ©
Bruce
... [
2004-10-14 22:33:28]
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:36:30 PM AEST
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An awesome dedication to the one u luv.
Keep the faith and hang tuff.luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:09:23 PM AEST
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| Very nice, it's awesome how you wrote this... i could imagine it |
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:24:57 AM AEST
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Bruce, this is truly wonderful...deep from the heart
TY so much
kelly x |
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by inoc on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:05:00 AM AEST
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this is so sweet and nice...
fitting romance in your life...
bet you can't wait for your next meet with her....
cheers!~ Bruce
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:17:13 AM AEST
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awwww your poems always amaze me your heart must be totally bursting with love and passion, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Your Words and Mine 4
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:45:04 PM AEST
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Aww a love so romantic.
Excellent Bruce
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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