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DONT WANT TO END
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:15:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was always scared of being hurt by some one
I was so scared that I wouldn’t be good enough
I was scared they would stop carrying
I was wrong they never did
But I can say one thing I don’t deserve it
I don’t know why she loved me
I don’t know why she still cares
All I gave her was pain
I cheated and lied I killed her inside
No one can see it but every one knows
I took her life she’s dead but still walks
Now she wants to stop carrying about us
But I don’t want to but really I have no say
After what I have done she still there for me every day
Good or bad she makes it all the same
I wish I changed at the start of things
I was there once a long time ago
When sky’s where blue all the time
Now there black and gray I took all the colure away.
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Re: DONT WANT TO END
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by Gimpie on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:40:55 PM AEST
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| This is really good...I can truly feel your sorrow, sorry for the way things were. Keep up the writing though. |
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Re: DONT WANT TO END
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:33:21 AM AEST
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| thank you for writing this poem bradley. i'm sorry for all our troubles but thank you for being there and talking to me. i'll talk to you soon.xoxo |
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