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Let me fall
Contributed by
gherkin
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I create an image in my mind
A silhouette becomes a master piece
I fill in detail with care of kind
And precious, you are my only release
I build up dreams, I hope
And I pray, you will come and find
Me, I cannot sleep, I cannot cope
Because I am so weak, you so defined
Scraping at my imagination
My thoughts collide and shatter themselves
My masterpiece, my only salvation
A single tear beyond my reach
Falls
I let go, for I can no longer grasp
Onto that which burns and blisters my skin
A whisper in the darkness, a sudden gasp
My masterpiece before me, no longer trapped within
The confines of my skull
You’ve broken free, jumped the wall
Never again to be my angel
Now leave me, let me, watch me
Fall
Copyright ©
gherkin
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2004-10-14 17:09:04]
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Re: Let me fall
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by Sirena_Degana on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:15:47 PM AEST
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this is a very pretty poem....
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Let me fall
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:10:15 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, i truly admire your use of words and visuals through-out this poem.
It wrenches my heart in a soothing kind of way..
If that's not too hard to understand. |
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Re: Let me fall
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by morgana on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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once agian....amazing poem!
you should ppublish these or enter contests!
i hope you keep writtin!
buhbye |
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