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Only Yours
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:54:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The words can't come out.
Where to start I am only 22.
Female, reaching out.
I love him more than anyone
could love him.
I wouldn't mind starting a family in the
future.
I heard the words I
don't like kids.
That hurt me more
than anything.
I want kids and only
yours.
I know you'll be a good
father.
Are you scared you have to
grow up?
Are you scared it's harder
than you thought?"
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2004-10-14 10:54:37]
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Re: Only Yours
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Great work! |
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Re: Only Yours
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:34:38 AM AEST
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| not bad!! i dont want kids now cuz of my problems and im not ready to be a daddy hope he is soon for u :P |
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Re: Only Yours
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:16:39 AM AEST
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| Great write. Very honest. |
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Re: Only Yours
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by 03614 on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 04:59:32 AM AEST
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Wow...great challenging question at the end there..Um i think this poem really reflects how you feel an. It's great how your words reveal and differentiates each other's opinions on d future...u panned from your point of view to the opposite partner in the second verse. I also love how you made your Point of view came on the last lines of the poem. It challenges the reader even though it's not directly at the reader.
Well written.
Keep it up gurl.
Gud luck.
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