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Bittersweet Strokes
Contributed by
Hoots
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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With blood trickling down
My already scarred arms,
Depression and Anguish
Enforce more self-harm.
Angst returns, once again
Bringing more twisted thoughts;
A sincere wish for my death
Can no longer be fought.
Behind a locked door,
In the dark, by myself,
Slashing the knife,
Destructing myself.
Pressing hard on the blade,
Carving into my wrist,
I contemplate how
I won’t even be missed.
Choking on tears,
Too much pride left to cry,
I know that I’m worthless,
All I deserve is to die.
A waste of good space,
Such a waste of a life;
I’m fixing the mistake
With bittersweet strokes of a knife.
Copyright ©
Hoots
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2004-10-14 10:53:46]
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Re: Bittersweet Strokes
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by izzy on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:48:14 AM AEST
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How sad I hope it's just a poem. Please don't hurt yourself.
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Re: Bittersweet Strokes
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by despised_freak on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:52:32 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! It's so emotional... wow. |
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Re: Bittersweet Strokes
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:08:29 AM AEST
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| this iz gr8!!! |
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Re: Bittersweet Strokes
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by emphaticplacebo on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:36:12 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem! I could really relate to this one, and you painted the picture so vividly. You have a massive amount of talent so keep up the top work!
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