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MORBID CYCLE
Contributed by
Hoots
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:41:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Weeks worth of torment
exploding inside;
it’s been several months
since these eyes truly cried.
Hold it all in,
it’s what is done best;
eagerly waiting
for eternal rest.
Reach for the knife,
a comforting tool;
wondering how
people are so cruel.
The blade, so sharp,
like a shard of broke glass;
depressing emotions
overcome to the mass.
Sit in a locked room,
search for old scars;
feelings of triumph
come from marred hips and arms.
Euphoric release,
all that is wanted;
diminish the hurt
by which one is haunted.
pressing the knife
against wounded skin;
drag it across,
feel it slide in.
Tear a large gash
right through the flesh;
blood starts to seep,
love it when fresh.
Fluids gush like
a crimson stained river;
observing a vein
that had just been severed.
It is then realized
the cut is too deep;
not wanting to die,
beginning to weep.
the desired relief
is replaced with more pain;
the sick, morbid cycle
begins once again.
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Hoots
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2004-10-14 10:41:16]
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Re: MORBID CYCLE
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by apcfan on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:01:08 PM AEST
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KickA$$ Poem. I know exactly how you feel.
I love it. Keep writing.
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Re: MORBID CYCLE
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:44:32 AM AEST
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| kewl |
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Re: MORBID CYCLE
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:25:55 PM AEST
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| amazing write. keep it up. |
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