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My own sweet 666
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 08:39:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So lost in a sea of nothingness,
Im lost in my own body,
Argumentative results begin,
To return what has always been there.
As the graveyard souls rely,
The stale air forms your face,
Your soul concaves around your hands,
Serious distress locked up in a case.
Moving motives explain the end,
Coated in a river of shame,
Night black outs ruin the time,
Bringing around intricate fame.
Concreted hell collapses,
Walls around your restraints crumble,
Understanding washing over me,
Wooden limbs can only fumble.
Terrorise my heart was the command,
Dead lines follow my feet,
Pretty clocks align the floor,
The three sixes on the clock suddenly work.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-10-14 08:39:55]
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Re: My own sweet 666
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 09:21:58 AM AEST
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| I suppose some may, but I can't comprehend. Sorry. God bless. |
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Re: My own sweet 666
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by xRotten_Insidex on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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| beautiful write. I liked it alot |
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