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Pitter Patter
Contributed by
smooshable
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:04:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pitter Patter.
The ants march on.
Pitter Patter.
The birds fly on.
The howling of a wolf.
Scares the sheep away.
The light of the sun.
Scares the owls away.
Pitter Patter.
The ants march on.
Pitter Patter.
The birds fly on.
Vengance wreaked with golf balls.
A chilling display.
Mans creation shatters.
Shards smashed away.
Pitter Patter.
The ants march on.
Pitter Patter.
The birds fly on.
The calming eye aproaches.
The children come out to play.
The beast is tamed.
The dust is clay.
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smooshable
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2004-10-14 07:04:25]
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Re: Pitter Patter
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:09:39 AM AEST
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| I liked it. It has a weird feel, but that is what is cool about ti. |
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Re: Pitter Patter
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:37:39 AM AEST
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| I agree with who wrote before me, it's difference from others is what I like about it. -cebre- |
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Re: Pitter Patter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:58:27 AM AEST
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| I like how you acknowledge the ordinary things of life in this poem, like the ants and birds. lol...I don't know what to make of it, but I like it a lot. Nice! |
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