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raw emotion
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 06:57:06 AM in AEST
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love is a word we neglectfully throw around
abusing its meaning just to hear the sound
but it is the definition I have honestly found
when I felt it for you...
your intruiging ability to recognize
the presence of a soul behind these eyes
makes us able to build unbreakable ties
and open up our hearts...
together vulnerable to dreams we lay
as drifting minds travel to memorable days
dreading the time we will go our seperate ways
you hold me tightly close...
give a kiss with your lips so sweet
like a cliche "you swept me off my feet"
its almost to perfect to repeat
but please do it again...
hair that falls brushing over my face
is ever so gently swept back into place
and oh how you do it with such a grace
that I feel beautiful...
the honesty of raw emotion
gives me a forboding notion
that our life together has been set in motion
and we will always be...
a uniqueness soddered from the two
I am no longer me nor you are you
we have forged together and created new
you are a part of me...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-14 06:57:06]
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Re: raw emotion
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by smooshable on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:21:14 AM AEST
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| Anyone who can't feel the noose of love yanking at their heart after reading that is souless. This poem truely encaptulates all the "small things" as we postmodernists like to term them. The small things that turn out to be the richest, most tangable moments that we hold onto when we are at our darkest moments. Thankyou for sharing that with us. |
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Re: raw emotion
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:39:26 AM AEST
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| This poem is really well written and has a lot of emotion in it. You're a talented writer. -cebre- |
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Re: raw emotion
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:44:58 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, it flows so well with deep emotion...............Mike |
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Re: raw emotion
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:54:58 AM AEST
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An awesome masterpeice.
Great writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: raw emotion
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:35:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem. No hate and seems like you are happy :-) |
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Re: raw emotion
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:55:56 PM AEST
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beautiful.....
this remarkably weaves the tapestry of true love. excellent. |
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