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Moving On

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:16:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Cant get this **** out of my head,
Cant get over the things that you said,
Where was you when i was down?
Whenever I needed you, you wasnt around,
Im so damaged inside, I know it wont be the same,
I sure as hell would love to put you to blame,
You took no interest in me or my brothers,
You got new kids now, and youre a better mother,
You give all of them a better life,
You also somebody else wife,
You lie and say you did the best you could,
If you could do it all over again, i dont think you would,
You say you was right there beside me, in my hospital bed,
I was so knocked out of it, i dont remember if you did,
You remember back in the days when all that mattered to you was a drink,
You didnt even stop to take the time to think,
I refuse to keep living in the past,
This pain that im feeling, will not last,
Its all your fault you made me this way,
Maybe someday you will actually pay.




Copyright © Jenn2004 ... [ 2004-10-14 01:16:23]
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Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:22:15 AM AEST
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Very good for you. I know the feelings well but u shall survive with your dedication to yourself.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy


Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:27:13 AM AEST
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You expressed yourself very well here. Thanks for sharing your work of poetry with us all in YPDC.


Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 06:40:09 AM AEST
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great poem. thanks for sharing

Jane


Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:56:33 AM AEST
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always good to get things off your chest and if it rhymes so much the better..lol. great.


Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 09:39:11 PM AEST
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Aww jenn, this is so touching and so sad.. I am sorry about this...
Hugs
Jenni




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