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Ardor
Contributed by
Elisabeth
on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Observing the majestic poise of your noble face as I look behind to see what truly is kind
Eternally, you have aided me externally to see inside
One of few words, I could take you there in less
Would you wait with me for that darkest hour, when the world knows chaotic as you and I see now?
I could take the vigor of your bright investigating mind
And drown the drive in pure amour and devotion of you
My love, I could
Without trial
Now I want to take you through electric blue
For I shall withdrawl my voice no longer
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
... [
2002-11-15 12:20:00]
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Re: Ardor
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I liked it.
Ginnie
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Re: Ardor
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by OreO on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:23:38 PM AEST
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Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
Thanks for sharing this one
I really enjoyed it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Ardor
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by hooray_its_jen on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:47:22 PM AEST
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Amazingly beautiful....I'm truly speechless
Take Care
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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