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Stayed Awake All Night
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:41:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Don't want to hear no more
I ain't dancing
no I don't wanna sing,
shadows are rising
the fires of heaven flicker
as I once again
F
A
L
L
Downnnnnn....
feels so very cold
as my heart of stone
s h a t t e r s
on the ground.
I scream and I cry
as Saddness and sorrow
take over
making me
not wanna wake up tommorrow
to deal with the pain.
I walk I talk
convince myself everything is fine
but deep inside I know
my descent will persist,
as i fall
scenes flow by
I laugh I cry I fade I die
and become a mist.
why do I exsist?.....
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-10-14 00:41:40]
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Re: Stayed Awake All Night
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:46:42 AM AEST
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Very sad but u get your point across very well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Stayed Awake All Night
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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| I understand that feeling. It's all so familiar to me. Sometimes we question God about our existence but I'm sure He has a purpose fo us in our life and that's why He brought us to life. I think everybody in this world is somehow or rather looking for his/her purpose. Well, you're not alone with that feeling. I've been there and I know it all too well. I hope you'll find you ascent soon. Anyway, great poem and would like to wish you well. |
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Re: Stayed Awake All Night
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:22:48 AM AEST
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| this iz great, i love how u set it out |
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Re: Stayed Awake All Night
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST
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wow, that was bloody ace. Nice one
glad I red that |
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