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The Moment
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:35:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're here for the moment
So i have something to say
I want you to know how i feel
Deep down i know it's real
I know you're hiding something
You have it locked up inside
I want you to let go
Let your feelings show
I'm not sure what it is
But i know it's there
I see it when i am near
Tell me what it is you fear
I want to get to know you
But is there something in the way?
Are you holding back?
Or are you just off track?
As i tear this page out
To give to you,
To let you know i might care
My feelings to share...
But do i dare say i care?
Or should i save my breathe
Your personallity speaks
It makes my knees weak
I enjoy getting to know you
But do you enjoy knowing me?
Is it the same thing?
Or am i just living in a dream?
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
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2004-10-13 21:35:45]
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Re: The Moment
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by Lessa on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:35:25 PM AEST
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thats so sweet, she`s silly for not appriciateing it. i like the lines "But do i dare say i care? Or should i save my breathe" thank you
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Re: The Moment
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by mylastwords on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:46:30 AM AEST
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i appreciate it...i had problems and i needed someone...if someone had given that to me i would have cried...someone did write me a poem...and i did cry...i just felt so special...im sorry she did not appreciate it...beautiful write...keep it up...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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