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Just a prayer
Contributed by
AdamChantell
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Can you really see me?
I'm down here if you didn't know
Struggling everyday
Living all alone
It's another day today
Can you lend a hand?
Because if not then I am afraid
My body will not grace this land
The pain grows daily
I have visions of living here
Having no one truly love me
Is what I really fear
Why am I here god?
Is it to live a life of sin?
Tell me why I have to live a life
Living without a true friend.
Am I a product of fate?
Maybe I was born a curse
All I really know now is
Deep down it really hurts...
I'm still down here now
I can see my reflexion of the floor
I ask who am I
I wonder about heaven's door...
I know there is good somewhere
But it's something I can not see
There is so much hate in this world
God just make me believe.....
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AdamChantell
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2004-10-13 21:23:13]
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Re: Just a prayer
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:27:54 PM AEST
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Avery hunble yet strong, touching prayer.
Hang tuff friend as u r on the right track. God honors all prayers be they ever so humble as this one is.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy |
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Re: Just a prayer
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:47:15 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. amazing, and excellently written. many people have those same questions, and some just settle for no answers and just leave it to be fate. |
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Re: Just a prayer
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:23:44 AM AEST
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It takes guts to be honest...and to question and reach out.
God does listen, and sees you more clearly, deeply than anyone can.
The world is wrong in so many ways--and our hearts cry out for something so much purer and better--a need that cannot be met anywhere else but in Him. |
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Re: Just a prayer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:09:30 AM AEST
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| this is such a wonderful poem! and i used to feel that way to. i truly hope things get better and God will help to truly believe. i do. i cant even tell you how wonderful i think your poem is. excellent job! keep writng. keep the faith. God bless. peace n love. ttfn. jenny |
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Re: Just a prayer
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by SpeedXDemon on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:27:48 PM AEST
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| I hope you found an answer. I too wish that I could be "made" to believe sometimes, but it's not that easy. If we were all made to choose right and believe all the time, then we would have no trial. Trials and tribulations are what makes us strong. Your poem is excellent, keep writing! |
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