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What you've done to me
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Deception, Lies, Hate is all there is now
Learned to never expect loyalty, truth, or happiness
Forgotten how any of that felt
Forgotten the hopes and dreams that once paraded my heart and soul
Forgotten how the thoughts of you once tickled my spine and made me blush
Everything once beautiful and colorful is now grey and blunt
You took everything away.
Leaving me in the dark letting me get poured on
Letting me suffer. Watching me crawl
You told me you loved me, I thought I could trust you
It was all just an act, Your nothing but lies.
You and your ***** up smile
The smile that made me melt, The smile that helped destroy me
I cant believe I was so blind.
I'm nothing to you....
So are you happy?
You finally made me crumble to my knees
Making me once again cold and empty
Never again to experience the sweet sensations that life gives
Cold and empty I am. Living in my kingdom of darkness
Forgotten how love felt. Forgotten what it feels like to be loved
Forgotten what happiness is...
Losing my will to live
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xRotten_Insidex
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2004-10-13 20:09:09]
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Re: What you've done to me
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:19:04 PM AEST
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This is so sad. I hope things get better for you. It is a nice write.
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Re: What you've done to me
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by humboldthunny17 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:20:30 PM AEST
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| You obviously express yourself well, I hope you will find everything u lost:) |
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Re: What you've done to me
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:15:47 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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