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Dark Cloud
Contributed by
humboldthunny17
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A Dark Cloud
Blocks me from view
of the light, and of the darkness
I never know, the way even I feel,
because I'm hiding it from myself.
A lonely person
Sitting small
Hiding from not only others,
but from herself
Like one last bird,
who didn't fly off,
just left.
confused.
Copyright ©
humboldthunny17
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2004-10-13 19:42:55]
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:47:53 PM AEST
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Very sad but entensley meaningfull.
Good owrk.
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:58:37 PM AEST
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Pretty meaningful and sad. Nice poem.
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:32:54 PM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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