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Choked Inside (not a very good title)
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My life's hanging by a thread,
a thread of hope that
tomorrow will not be the same.
My passion's slowly disappearing,
firey passion flowing from within myslef,
choking me to death in my tub.
My minds haunted with memories and shame,
turning, crashing, bashing, mangling,
strangling everything happy inside of me.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-10-13 18:32:54]
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Re: Choked Inside (not a very good title)
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:39:09 PM AEST
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what would a better title be? Death of Passion?
Happiness Dying? Flickering Fire?
Broken Thread?...
Someone has a forum on about choosing titles..I suck at it. Yours is good..how about All Choked Up? LOL.
good write..but I hope you get to feeling better..soon!!! |
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Re: Choked Inside (not a very good title)
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by afterdark on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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This should of had more comments to it..Good write..
AfterDark.. |
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