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Autumn Thunder
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:55:51 PM in AEST
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Quiet now
Except for the occasional
Roll of thunder
Outside my bedroom window
That leaves me wishing
I was safe
Wrapped up in your arms
Comforted by your gentle embrace
As your voice, just as gentle
Lulls me to sleep
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-13 17:55:51]
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Re: Autumn Thunder
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:22:39 PM AEST
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| Aww! How sweet! This one is really good! |
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Re: Autumn Thunder
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:26:53 PM AEST
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Brings back to mind the thunderstorms I recall from three years spent in southern Wyoming. The lightning was intense. This is a very well written note of longing. Well done !!
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Re: Autumn Thunder
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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| ummm this is nice. |
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Re: Autumn Thunder
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:37:16 PM AEST
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serene and peaceful I loved this I can hear the roll of thunder love that sound
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Re: Autumn Thunder
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:37:50 PM AEST
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In my opinion,there's nothing better than a thunderstorm,but even better with someone you care about there with you during, I agree.Very well written !
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