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That Faithful Day
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:19:54 PM in AEST
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You never understand the value of someone,
until that fateful day,
the person who meant the most to you,
is suddenly taken away,
you're left in the world,
feeling cold and empty,
as you mourn the death,
of the only one you've ever loved,
and now you've felt the pain,
that so many have before,
you feel no new love will be gained,
as you shut the door..
and lock everyone out,
feeling cold and empty,
as you mourn the death,
of the only one you've ever loved.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
... [
2004-10-13 17:19:54]
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Re: That Faithful Day
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by ll on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:48:16 PM AEST
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| good write. i know what you mean.exept that those 2 people didn't leave me yet.i know how it feels when they will leave someday.they are my friends i will ever have.i only have 2. |
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Re: That Faithful Day
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:42:36 PM AEST
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How deeply sad..I'm sincerely hoping you didn't go through and are not going through these emotions,but sadly I think you are.I know what it's like to lose a friend,not a loved one though and I'm praying I'm never going to have to.Still,your write was appreciated,well written and true,I have felt many emotions described in certain verses.I'm deeply sorry for your loss,
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